Melanie Grace

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  • Nabu and Aviva — The Almost-Love Story That Never Was

    Nabu and Aviva — The Almost-Love Story That Never Was

    Of everything in “Bring Us Home,” this might be the relationship people ask me about the most once they hear a little about it. So today, let’s talk about Nabu — and the quiet, aching almost-romance between him and Aviva.

    Who is Nabu?

    Nabu is a young Babylonian court musician — born and raised in the shadow of the empire’s splendor. He’s earnest, a little awkward, and genuinely kind, even when he doesn’t quite know how to talk to people. He believes music is mathematics: structure, rules, a perfect ladder of sound climbing toward heaven, “one perfect brick laid on the next.”

    When Aviva is brought to the palace, Nabu is assigned to “refine” her — to retrain the “raw” sound of her voice into something that fits the court’s polished style.

    He has no idea what he’s about to walk into.

    Two musical worlds meet

    The first real scene between them is almost comedic — Nabu fumbling his assignment, Aviva sharp and guarded, both of them very aware of the power imbalance between “court musician” and “captive girl assigned to be refined.” But then Nabu plays her his music — that rigid, mathematical, ascending melody — and Aviva tells him exactly what’s missing from it.

    “It doesn’t lack discipline. It lacks a ceiling.”

    Then she sings him a fragment of her mother’s lullaby — and Nabu hears something he’s never heard in his entire life inside those palace walls: a melody that aches. A bent note. A sound that moves like water around a stone instead of climbing a staircase.

    “I don’t think I have ever once heard a song that aches,” he tells her. “Everything here is a shout of victory. We have no chord for… missing something.”

    “Two Rivers”

    This moment becomes their duet, “Two Rivers” — two musical languages, two completely different worlds, weaving together into something neither of them could make alone. It’s tender, it’s a little funny, and it’s the emotional center of the whole Babylon section of the show for me.

    Why it’s an “almost”

    Here’s the thing about Nabu and Aviva — this was never going to be a simple love story, and I wrote it that way on purpose. Nabu represents everything that’s trying to absorb Aviva into Babylon: comfort, safety, beauty, belonging. And for a while, there’s a real pull there — not just romantic, but the pull of fitting in somewhere, finally.

    But the story isn’t about whether Aviva chooses Babylon or Jerusalem through a romance. It’s bigger than that. So what Nabu and Aviva have stays exactly what it is: real, tender, and ultimately untouched — which I think makes it hit even harder.

    The moment that changes everything

    Without spoiling the climax (that’s coming in a future post!), I’ll say this: when everything falls apart at Belshazzar’s feast, Nabu has a choice to make — and so does Aviva. And the line he says to her in that moment is one of my favorites in the entire script: “I was wrong about what a song is for. Some things are worth more than a city.”

    He chooses her. Not in the way you might expect — but in a way that costs him something real.

    A love story that’s really about identity

    If I’m honest, Nabu and Aviva’s story isn’t really “about” romance at all. It’s about what happens when someone from “the other side” genuinely sees you — your culture, your music, your ache — and it changes them. And it’s about the cost of choosing truth over comfort, even when comfort has a face you’ve grown to care about.

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    Tomorrow: the king who thought his empire would last forever — Belshazzar, and the night everything changed.

  • Daniel: In Babylon, But Never Of It

    Daniel: In Babylon, But Never Of It

    Posting Date: July 15

    This week I’ve been introducing you to the cast of “Bring Us Home” — and today’s character is a little different from the others, because he’s the one principal in this whole show drawn directly from Scripture rather than invented. Meet Daniel.

    A real biblical figure, fifty years into the story

    Daniel was taken to Babylon as a youth, in one of the earliest waves of deportation — decades before Aviva is even born. By the time we meet him in “Bring Us Home,” he’s an old man. Seventy years old, give or take. He’s served in the Babylonian court under multiple kings. He’s seen empires rise. He’s about to watch one fall.

    And through all of it, he’s held onto something most people in his position would have quietly let go of a long time ago.

    “I have never once let Babylon serve in me”

    There’s a line I wrote for Daniel that I think is the truest thing about him: “I serve in Babylon. I have never once let Babylon serve in me.”

    He’s not bitter about his circumstances. He’s not pretending the last fifty years didn’t happen. He wears the robes. He holds the position. But there’s “an ocean,” as he puts it, between serving in a place and belonging to it — and that ocean is the only thing that’s kept his soul alive.

    This is why Daniel becomes Aviva’s guide when she’s brought into the palace. He’s not warning her from a safe distance. He’s lived inside the exact tension she’s about to face — for fifty years — and he’s still standing.

    “The song under the song”

    When Daniel meets Aviva in the palace, he gives her advice that I think about a lot: “It costs you nothing to wear their gold. But do not let them buy the one thing you brought in through that gate. The song under the song. Do you understand me?”

    He won’t just hand her the answer, either — and that’s deliberate. He tells her if he hands it to her, it stays his. She has to find it herself, or it won’t hold when the weight comes.

    That’s such a real picture of discipleship, honestly. The people who’ve walked the road longest don’t always rescue you from the test. Sometimes the most loving thing they can do is make sure you’re equipped to walk through it yourself.

    His signature song: “Delay No Longer”

    Daniel’s song draws from Daniel 5 and Daniel 9 — moments of crisis and prayer near the end of his life. It’s a driving, urgent tenor solo, and it’s positioned right before Belshazzar’s feast — Daniel on his knees in faith, while across the stage, the king he serves is reaching for a wine cup in fear. Same night. Same approaching doom. Two completely different responses.

    Why Daniel isn’t the lead

    I get asked sometimes why a show about the exile wouldn’t center on Daniel — his story is so well-known, so dramatic. But “Bring Us Home” isn’t trying to retell the book of Daniel. It’s about the everyday people — the refugees, the musicians, the families by the riverbank who didn’t live in the palace.

    Daniel’s story is essential to this show, but it’s not the center of it. He’s the elder statesman who shows up at exactly the right moment to guide the next generation — which, honestly, might be the most faithful way to honor who he actually was.

    The moment everyone remembers

    I don’t want to give too much away here — there’s a whole “Behind the Song” post coming on this — but I’ll just say: when the writing appears on the wall at Belshazzar’s feast, and nobody in that entire palace can read it… Daniel is the only one who can. And the only one who will.

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    Tomorrow, meet the king at the center of the empire — Belshazzar, and the almost-romance between Aviva and a young Babylonian musician named Nabu is coming up right after that.

  • Saba Elan and the Harp in the Willows

    Saba Elan and the Harp in the Willows

    Posting Date: July 14

    So far you’ve met Aviva and her mother Miryam. Today I want you to meet the man whose vow set the whole emotional spine of “Bring Us Home” in motion — Aviva’s grandfather, Saba Elan.

    Who is Saba Elan?

    Before the exile, Saba Elan was the chief harpist of the Temple in Jerusalem. For forty years, he played beneath the singers in the temple courts — including, in the show’s opening moments, his own daughter Miryam, when she was just a teenager. He’s gruff. He’s proud. And underneath all of that, he’s tender in a way he’d never admit to out loud.

    When the city falls, he’s the one who grabs Miryam’s hand and tells her — as soldiers close in — “They can take the city. They cannot take what you carry in here.”

    That line is basically Saba Elan’s entire character in one sentence.

    The vow

    When the exiles arrive at the riverbank in Babylon, Saba Elan does something that becomes one of the central images of the whole show. He unwraps the harp he carried all the way from Jerusalem — the same harp from the Temple — and he hangs it in the willow trees.

    And he makes a vow: he will not play it. Not for gold. Not for safety. Not to entertain his captors. Not one note — until the day they go home.

    One by one, other exiles follow him, hanging their own instruments in the willows, until the trees are heavy with silent harps and lyres. It’s one image, but it does so much work — it’s grief and protest and worship all at once.

    “By the Willows”

    This is Saba Elan’s signature song, and it’s drawn almost directly from Psalm 137 — the overseers mock the exiles, demanding they sing “songs of Zion” for entertainment, and the elders respond with total silence. Saba Elan stands, says nothing, and simply looks at the man demanding a performance. That silence becomes the most powerful thing in the scene.

    I love writing moments where the most dramatic choice a character makes is to do nothing. Saba Elan’s silence isn’t weakness. It’s the loudest thing in the room.

    The promise to a sleeping baby

    There’s a quieter scene — one of my favorites in the entire show — where Saba Elan sits by the fire with baby Aviva. He’s gruff with Miryam, as always, but the moment the baby’s hand closes around his finger, something in him cracks open. He makes her a promise: that harp comes down on one day, and one day only — the day they go home. And when that day comes, he’s going to teach her every song Babylon tried to make them forget.

    He thinks she’s asleep. He says it anyway. That’s Saba Elan.

    When the vow finally gets kept — sort of

    I don’t want to spoil too much here, because there’s a moment near the end of the show involving Saba Elan, that harp, and Aviva that genuinely gets me every time I work on it. Let’s just say: keeping a vow for seventy years doesn’t always mean you’re the one who gets to finish it. Sometimes keeping the vow is passing it on.

    I’ll save the rest for the “Behind the Song” post on this one.

    Tell me about your “Saba Elan”

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    Tomorrow: the one character in this story drawn straight from Scripture — Daniel.

  • Miryam’s Songs — The Mothers Who Keep the Memory Alive

    Miryam’s Songs — The Mothers Who Keep the Memory Alive

    Yesterday I introduced you to Aviva, the heart of “Bring Us Home.” Today I want you to meet the woman who made Aviva who she is — without ever raising her voice, without ever leaving the riverbank. Her mother, Miryam.

    Who is Miryam?

    Miryam was a temple singer in Jerusalem — just a girl, around sixteen, the night the walls fell. She remembers the gold light in the temple courts. She remembers her own father, Saba Elan, playing the harp beneath her as she sang. And she remembers the soldiers, the fire, the chains — all of it, in the space of one terrifying night.

    By the time we meet her again in exile, decades have passed. She’s a mother now, holding her newborn daughter by a river that isn’t home, in a country that doesn’t want her.

    And she makes a decision that shapes the entire rest of the story: she decides that Aviva will know Jerusalem too — even if all she can give her is a song.

    “Hush Now (The River Lullaby)”

    Miryam’s signature song is the lullaby that runs through the entire show — “Hush Now (The River Lullaby).” It’s the song she sings to baby Aviva: a golden city, doves in the morning, a temple full of singing. A whole homeland, folded into a bedtime song for a child who will grow up never having seen any of it.

    What gets me about this song is what it actually is, underneath the melody: it’s an act of defiance disguised as comfort. Miryam isn’t just soothing her daughter to sleep. She’s making sure that if Jerusalem is ever going to be rebuilt — in stone or in spirit — it has to survive in someone’s memory first. And if her own memory isn’t enough, she’ll plant it in her daughter’s.

    The cost of being the keeper

    Here’s what I think people sometimes miss about characters like Miryam: keeping a memory alive isn’t passive. It’s exhausting. It’s lonely. Miryam carries grief for a city most of the people around her — including her own daughter — have never seen and can’t fully understand. She watches Aviva grow up curious about Babylonian songs, Babylonian markets, Babylonian life… and she has to decide, again and again, not to let that frighten her into clinging tighter.

    There’s a moment late in the show where Aviva finally asks her the hard question — how do I grieve a home I’ve never had? — and Miryam’s answer isn’t a lecture. It’s something gentler and, I think, truer: “Some things can’t be explained. They can only be carried.”

    The passing of the song

    Without spoiling too much, I’ll say this: the lullaby Miryam sings to baby Aviva doesn’t stay the same throughout the show. It comes back later — broken, when Aviva starts to forget it under the weight of Babylon’s comfort. And it comes back one more time, near the end, in a moment where the roles reverse completely.

    That’s one of my favorite threads in the whole musical, and I can’t wait to do a full “Behind the Song” post on it.

    This one’s personal

    If you’re a mother — or if you’ve ever been the person in your family who held onto the stories, the faith, the traditions for everyone else — I think Miryam’s going to mean something to you. She’s not flashy. She’s not the one who gets the dramatic confrontation with the king. But without her, there’s no Aviva, and there’s no “Bring Us Home.”

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    Tomorrow, meet the man who taught Aviva her first vow — her grandfather, Saba Elan.

  • Meet Aviva — The Girl Who Knows Jerusalem Only Through Songs

    Meet Aviva — The Girl Who Knows Jerusalem Only Through Songs

    Over the next several days, I want to introduce you to the people who carry “Bring Us Home.” We’ll start with the one whose journey is the show: Aviva.

    Who is Aviva?

    Aviva is a young woman, born by the rivers of Babylon — seventy years into the exile. She has never seen Jerusalem. Never walked through its gates, never stood in the Temple, never smelled smoke rising from the altar. Everything she knows about her “homeland” comes from one source: the songs her mother, Miryam, sings to her.

    A golden city. Doves in the morning. A temple full of music. That’s Jerusalem, to Aviva — not a memory, but a melody.

    And for most of her life, that’s been enough. Until it isn’t.

    Bright, restless, and caught between two worlds

    What I love about Aviva is that she’s not a passive figure waiting for a calling to find her. She’s bright. She’s sharp-tongued. She’s restless — and honestly, who wouldn’t be? She’s been told her whole life to ache for a place she’s never seen, while living in a place that, frankly, has a lot going for it. The markets. The music. The girls her age teaching her counting games with rhythms that aren’t from “home” but are still genuinely fun.

    She’s not wrong to notice that tension. That’s what makes her real.

    Her “I want” song: “Why Must I Weep”

    Aviva’s signature song in the show is called “Why Must I Weep.” It’s her breaking point — the moment she finally says out loud what she’s felt for years: “How do I grieve a home I’ve never had?”

    It’s not rebellion for the sake of rebellion. It’s an honest, aching question from someone who has spent her entire life carrying a longing she didn’t choose and has never fully understood. And by the end of the song, something starts to shift in her — she starts to wonder if the very weight of that longing might be proof the city is real after all.

    The voice that changes everything

    There’s a moment earlier in the story — when Aviva is just a child — where a soldier threatens the camp, and she instinctively sings a fragment of her mother’s lullaby. It stops him cold. The whole camp falls silent. And her grandfather, Saba Elan, watches with something that isn’t quite pride — it’s fear.

    Because he knows: a voice like that, Babylon will hear about.

    That moment sets up everything that follows. Aviva’s gift — the very thing that’s kept her connected to a home she’s never seen — is the same thing that gets her noticed by the empire that wants to make her forget it.

    Where her journey leads

    I won’t give away everything here (that’s what the “Behind the Song” posts are for!), but I’ll say this: Aviva’s arc is the arc of the entire musical. She starts the show as a girl who only knows Jerusalem as a song. By the end, she’s the one leading her people back to it — carrying a harp that hasn’t been played in seventy years, and a question that finally has an answer.

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    Tomorrow, meet the woman who kept the songs alive for her — Aviva’s mother, Miryam.